It was the first panel that killed me this time XD. I'm still not satisfied with it, but I got fed up with reworking it.
I feel like I've stopped letting myself get away with a lot of my old lazy drawing habits and that's contributing to a slower page process. That, and I keep making the pages more difficult for no reason XD. The vignettes started as plain grayscale with simple shading to facilitate quick updates, but I just couldn't keep myself from adding tons of detail :|. I think the next time I do vignettes they'll be cel-shaded, in color. That should satisfy my need to have them look good without causing slow updates.
Anyway XDD, thanks for reading! New vote incentive is a closeup of Luna in that last panel. It's my favorite part of the page and a lot of detail was lost in the web conversion :B.