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Vol1-Ch3-Page-18

Wherein we learn more about Ten :B

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This page tortured me. Every time I thought I was done, I found something that I missed: forgot to shade the top panel, forgot to color the water, forgot to draw the Skyward in Luna's dock (in that order) XD. Argh, but it's here, and all organized into the new Chapter 3.

There's a new cover page for this chapter, as well as a new first page to provide a more coherent opening :]. Check the archive for more details.

Vote incentive is a closeup of that last panel. My "favorite" one.

Thanks for reading! I really appreciated all the feedback for the revised chapter two pages :D

Edit: YazzyDream was the first to catch the Black Candle on this page 8)

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